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Friday, June 13, 2014
Friday the 13th ~ A Killer POV with Edward Lorn

Happy Friday the 13th, everybody. I’m E. (Only my mother calls me Edward). Nice to make your acquaintance. I want to talk to you about a little project I’ve been working on—a serial novel entitled CRUELTY. The first five episodes are currently available on Amazon.com, as well as Audible. Once you’re done reading this guest post, you can check out Episode One here:
The idea behind CRUELTY is simple: a slasher film done as a literary
novel, one that focuses more on character development than death and mayhem. I
went into the project with a few ground rules: no attractive teens who’re
murdered due to “immoral” behavior; every cast member should be flawed; and the
protagonist should not be obvious. I also wanted to get inside the mind of an
unstoppable killing machine.
Growing up, I was a fan of the Jason Vorhees movies. To this day, he’s
still my favorite in the realm of slasher films. One of the best parts of Friday the 13th Part Two for
me was Jason’s POV. Throughout that film, and subsequent sequels, we’re allowed
behind the eyes of the killer as he stalks his prey. Unfortunately, we never
get to hear Jason’s thoughts as he mows down those stupid enough to vacation in
or around his beloved Crystal Lake .
This always bothered me. I mean, we know Jason’s motivations (Alice Hardy
beheads Jason’s murderous mother, Pamela, in the first film), but how does he
feel about his actions? Is he simply some mindless killer who lacks conscious
thought? Does he get a rush of orgasmic glee while hacking and slashing his way
through promiscuous teens, douchebags, and dull-eyed stoners? Is he remorseful,
feeling as if he’s only doing his duty, doing what Mommy would have wanted him
to do? I might be in the minority here, but I’d like nothing more than to pick
Jason’s brain, and because sitting down with Mr. Vorhees would likely end up
with me in several pieces by the conclusion of the interview, I decided to
create my own unstoppable killer. I wanted to get inside the mind of a silent
and destructive force. Thus, Cruelty was born.
It’s no secret that I have a twisted sense of humor and an overall
warped imagination. If you’ve read any of my work, you’ll know that I rarely
write about “good guys”. This is because “good guys” don’t appeal to me.
They’re—how can I put this nicely?—fucking boring. A hero’s motivations are
simple: be a hero, save the day, pass go, collect two million dollars ($200
dollars for passing go is so 1980, don’t you think?). Baddies intrigue me.
Their motivations are always more interesting to me, because people rarely set
out in life with the intention of being a horrible person. So what makes a
serial killer with supernatural strengths tick? What goes through their minds
while they dismember and deal death sentences? Ah, that is the question, isn’t
it? I believe the inner workings of such a mind is far more terrifying than
witnessing the carnage take place. If you agree, take a peek into the Cruelty’s
psyche. Sit down, kick back, and relax. Here, I’ll hold your hand.
Review
*Book source
~ A review copy was provided in exchange for an honest review.
Title ~ Cruelty
Series ~ Cruelty, #5
Author ~ Edward Lorn
Publisher ~ Edward Lorn
Published ~ 8 June 2014
Genre ~ Horror/Serial
Pages ~ 76
My Rating ~ 4 bites and a nibble
Forgiveness
went for a stroll in Episode Four and hasn’t gone home yet. Oh, no he hasn’t.
Instead he meets up with Markum, Holden and Nell Morgan and they don’t know
what the hell he is. For that matter, neither do I.
I just want to run fast as fast can be, so he never catches me.
Twon
& Ollie are up to bad shenanigans at Kerr County
Medical Center
and now they have Will and Kirk. Man, I hate that fucker Twon. I want him to
die, be resurrected, so he can die again. And what the hell is up with Momma?
Because she sure as shit knows something we don’t.
Innis,
oh Innis. I can’t even…nope, not going there.
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Saturday, March 22, 2014
Saturday Shorts
Book source ~ Purchased at Amazon.
Title ~ Cruelty
Series ~ Cruelty, Episode 1
Author ~ Edward Lorn
Publisher ~ Edward Lorn
Published ~ 4 October 2013
Genre ~ Horror/Serial
Pages ~ 53
My Rating ~ 4 bites out of 5
There’s
a serial killer out there and it’s name is Cruelty. But Cruelty is just the
tool for the true serial killer. Who else is out there waiting for some
unsuspecting stranger to cross paths with Cruelty?
This
is Episode One of a 10-part serial and it starts out with a prostitute and a
deaf guy walking down the road. No, really. I was like…wtf is going on here?
But having read Lorn’s work before I knew this was only the benign beginning
and everything was about to go to shit for the characters. I hate when I’m
right.
Poor
19-yr-old Will only wants to get laid. His friend Kirk sets him up with a
prostitute he happens to know to get the job done, but Will has no idea this
one little decision by his small head is going to be the absolute worst one in
his entire life. I’m sure there are many guys who have made those same kinds of
decisions at one point or another, but for Will it means his decision puts him
in the path of Cruelty.
Then
there’s Innis who catches her skunk of a boyfriend cheating on her. Her heat of
the moment decision to grab her dog Merlo
and take off is another such bad decision that certainly didn’t seem bad at the
time.
Texas
State Trooper Tom Morgan is on his routine nightly patrol when the B&E call
comes in. He probably figured it would be a typical call, teens causing trouble
or drug addicts trying to score some cash. Little does he know…
This
story is well-written and the different POVs come together to dovetail very
nicely. The creepiest POV is Cruelty’s. Who wants to be in the mind of a giant
baby doll serial killer? Not me. My only complaint about this story is Cruelty’s
physical self. I just can’t seem to get scared enough of a giant baby doll.
Yes, it is a serial killer. That part of Cruelty is definitely Depends-worthy,
but maybe I’m not appropriately scared of Cruelty because baby dolls don’t
creep me out. I’m not sure, but the rest of this story is creeptastic and
horrifying in a Holy Shit! kind of way and don’t get me started on Cruelty’s
Master. Gah! I’m hooked and can’t wait to see what happens next.
Book source ~ Purchased at Amazon.
Title ~ Cruelty
Series ~ Cruelty, Episode 2
Author ~ Edward Lorn
Publisher ~ Edward Lorn
Published ~ 9 November 2013
Genre ~ Horror/Serial
Pages ~ 48
My Rating ~ 4 bites out of 5
Cruelty
Episode Two picks up right after Episode One left off. This is a serial after
all. This episode contains more about the people who have been forced into
Cruelty’s path either directly or indirectly, so we revisit old friends and
gain some new ones.
Turtle
is the meth addicted boyfriend of Jennifer the prostitute of Episode One. The
description of his addiction is…frightening. But he is only a stepping stone
for more characters, Twon and Ollie who are the ones behind the meth operation
in the area.
Kirk
is Will’s roomie and seriously addicted to working out. He can thank Turtle for
sending Twon and Ollie his way.
Will
has so many questions to answer when the police show up at the gas station
where he dialed 911. The investigation of the seriously fucked up shit that has
gone down this night is only beginning and we’re introduced to Sheriff Randy
Miser, Deputy Nick Wuncell, Trooper Natalie Holden and State Investigator Frank
Markum.
Innis
is in a nightmare, both waking and sleeping. Sweet Baby Jane! And we get
Cruelty’s skin crawling POV as well. *shudders*
The
book ends on Merlo ’s
POV and I’m beginning to wonder what role the dog is going to play in this
tale.
Another
well-written episode and Lorn is really layering an excellent story here. Having
several POVs to follow gives me a chance to see and hear how other
characters/players are connected in this seriously fucked up story about a baby
doll serial killer. Again, I’m not very freaked out about Cruelty’s appearance,
but being in its mind? Oh yeah…makes my skin crawl. Bring on Episode Three!
Book source ~ Review copy provided in exchange for an honest review.
Title ~ Cruelty
Series ~ Cruelty, Episode 3
Author ~ Edward Lorn
Publisher ~ Edward Lorn
Published ~ 25 February 2014
Genre ~ Horror/Serial
Pages ~ 50
My Rating ~ 4 bites out of 5
Episode
Three takes us back a bit to give us an idea of who John Landover is and how
he’s connected. I’m glad because that loose end was bugging me a bit.
The
investigation proceeds with Trooper Holden and SI Markum leading the charge.
Trooper
Morgan is still in surgery and his wife, Nell is introduced.
Innis
is still in Hell. I can’t revisit that, so I’m not gonna.
Will
is in danger from more than Cruelty, but he doesn’t know it yet. He heads out
to see what is up with Kirk and why he’s in the hospital.
Ending
this episode with Cruelty’s POV was diabolical. All I can do is shudder and
shudder some more.
Layer
upon layer this picture is growing like a giant painting being laid out on a
once white canvas, the creepy spine-tingling-lose-bladder-control kind of picture
that can’t be unseen. I’m not sure I want to see the next layer, yet I know I
won’t be able to resist continuing. I will want to know what happens even if it
means running the risk of nightmares. Bring it!
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