Dream Warrior

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Dream Warrior

Dark Warrior Alliance, #1

Brenda Trim & Tami Julka

29 January 2015

Paranormal | Romance

394 Pages

                                                                                       

My Rating ~ 1 bite

Zander Tarakesh is the Vampire King of the Tehrex Realm and he and his Dark Warriors keep unsuspecting humans safe from the things that go bump and crash and rampaging in the night. When he comes across all-too-human Elsie Hayes he’s astounded and alarmed that she’s his Fated Mate. Elsie is a widow who lost her husband to a demon attack, but during the course of her investigation into his murder she discovers the evil in the dark. She joins a group that fights vampire, but ends up getting hurt. In rides Zander and his Dark Warriors to her rescue. But how long can they keep their true selves secret from her? And when she finds out will she attempt to rid the Earth of their vileness?

This story started out so interesting and then…ugh. It is full of repetition. I was so sick of hearing how much Elsie loved her husband and how she would never love, let alone marry, another for the rest of her life. Um, she’s in her early 20s. How dramatic of her. Then there’s Zander. Good grief. How many times did I have to read about how hard he was around her, how he loses all control, how much he wanted her but had to take it slow, or how she was his Fated Mate? All the fucking time. It was practically on every other page. *head meet wall, repeatedly* The pacing is all over the place, the writing amateurish, and the timeline is all screwed up. There’s only a smidgeon of interesting shit to recommend this, but not enough for me to continue on with the series.