Tuesday, May 9, 2017

Morningstar

*Book source ~ A review copy was provided 
in exchange for an honest review
Morningstar, #1
18 October 2011
Paranormal | Romance
334 Pages

My Rating ~ 3 bites

Dahlia is not like other humans. But she doesn’t know that. Yet. She’s living a pretty boring life until one day she runs into Belial and her group of co-workers. Well, co-workers in the loosest sense. They’re actually fallen angels and they can’t believe they’ve discovered a reincarnated Primangel Ladriam, Lucifer’s one true love. Uh, oh. Shit’s about to hit the fan because she’s supposed to be imprisoned in Heaven, not be loose down on Earth.

While I find this story quite entertaining at times, there are other times where it drags on and on. Also, the writing is sloppy and jerky as if the author doesn’t want to completely fill out the scenes. It could definitely use more editing. In addition, Dahlia is a bit too Mary Sue. She can do no wrong and everyone loves her. *gag me* Except the angels, of course. They hate her. And my biggest complaint is the ending. Who ends a book right in the middle of a critical fight scene?! No. Just, no. There was a perfect stopping point right before it got that far. I am unbelievably pissed about the ending.

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