Thursday, July 14, 2016

Kindle Review ~ The Prison Secretary

My Kindle Reviews will consist of:
Kindle Lending Library
Kindle First
Erotica ~ Mature 18+

*Book source ~ Kindle Lending Library
Author ~ John Louis
Published ~ 20 February 2015
Genre ~ Erotica
Pages ~ 153

My Rating ~ 2 bites

When Angela Prescott takes a summer internship at a correctional facility she doesn’t expect to come face to face with high school bully Sean Anderson. While satisfying to see Karma at work, the boot camp facility is hiding dangerous secrets and Angela gets caught in the middle. Will she and now friend Sean survive?

Angela’s basically a decent person and the boot camp is a brutal environment, made more so by crooked staff. Sean learns lessons about himself he had no idea he needed to learn and Angela grows up. The characters are ok and the naughty scenes are pretty good, but the writing is substandard. I’m not sure how many times I sighed in exasperation. Was this thing even edited? And I mean by a professional, not by a friend who got a B in English that one time. This story had so much sexy naughty potential and it was all ruined by the terrible writing. *sigh*


  1. Ugh! I hate those B English friends. You need more of an A English Friend if you want it at least somewhat normal. lol

    To bad it wasn't what you expected but WTF is CFNM?