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Erotica ~ Mature 18+
*Book source ~ Kindle Lending Library
Title ~Bisexual Cuckold
Author ~ Natasha Wallace
Published ~ 17 January 2016
Genre ~ Erotica
Pages ~ 37
My Rating ~ 2 bites
Gregg defers to his hot wife in all things and
he’s been the cuckold many a time for her, so when she says she wants their
neighbor to pound him in the ass he acquiesces even though he’s never considered
guys in that way. But now that she’s put the thought in his head he can’t stop
thinking about it.
This would be one hot story if it didn’t have so
many problems. Amateur writing and shitty editing kill it. Actually, I don’t
think it was edited at all. Gregg is the most interesting person in the story,
but then again it’s told from his POV, so he has slightly more depth than his
wife whatshername and the stud next door. If this is an example of this author’s
writing I won’t be looking at any more books. No matter how hot the story, shit
writing is still shit writing.
What a shame! From that description I was VERY interested :(
ReplyDeleteExactly my thought, Berls. Very disappointing. *sigh*
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