*Book source
~ Picked up for free at AllRomance.
Title ~ Zakia and the Cowboy
Series ~ Thunder Creek Ranch, #1
Author ~ Lorraine Nelson
Publisher ~ Evernight Publishing
Published ~ 5 October 2011
Genre ~ Romance
Pages ~ 179
My Rating ~ 3 bites and a nibble out of 5
Zakia
has a nasty stalker and he’s escalating things. Fearing for her and her twins’
lives she and her best friend Sam plan her escape. Telling no one where she’s
heading she goes back to the ranch of her ex-husband, Luke. Unsure of her
welcome she hopes he’ll at least protect their boys, but Luke has never stopped
loving her and, despite their past, he can’t turn her or his sons away. Will
they be safe or will the stalker catch up to them? And will Zakia and Luke be
able to let the past go in order to make a new life together as a family?
Not
a bad romance with a scary stalker plot, but I found the writing a tad stilted
and the dialogue at times was painful. I did find it hard to believe that the
stalker could get in and out of Zakia’s house unnoticed or tripping the alarms.
What about security cameras? Motion sensors? She has a rich family, so why
couldn’t they install some spyware? The guy stalking her wasn’t a super spy, so
it shouldn’t have been hard to catch him even with his sneaky ways. So the plot
was a bit implausible and yet the underlying story wasn’t bad. The twins were
cute and Luke was hunky. Secondary characters were ok also and it seems there
will be a romance between Zakia’s best friend Samantha and Luke’s friend Blake.
Not sure I’ll continue with the series though.
The plot sounds a bit unbelievable! Looks like the characters saved it a little though.
ReplyDeleteIt was a bit outside the realm, but not a terrible read.
Deleteoh yeah bad dialogue can really break a book unfortunately.
ReplyDeleteI agree, Lily. It isn't horrible, but it isn't awesome either.
DeleteDefinitely seems like it could have used some more realism. Glad you liked aspects though.
ReplyDeleteA little bit, but it wasn't a bad romance.
DeleteThat does sound unrealistic, especially if they were a wealthy family, plus I'm not a fan of cowboys in books, probably because when I was younger my dad made us watch so many westerns with him, so now I avoid them xD
ReplyDeleteYeah, unless you like westerns (I don't mind them) that could put you off them. lol
DeleteI have a feeling this one isn't for me. Between my reaction to the cover (which was "blah" for some reason) and the super unbelievability of that plot it's not sounding like one to devote valuable reading time. Sounds like it wasn't a bad read though, so that's good :)
ReplyDeleteI agree. You probably would not like this one, Berls even though it wasn't bad.
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